A mid-day quickie

For years, my writing time was late late late. After the school day (and now, work day), after dinner (or back then, rehearsals). In grad school, I might not get settled into the chair till 11 pm, but I’d write till 3 am or so.

Now, I can usually get started, in earnest each night, by 7 (by the time I get home, eat, make coffee, etc.). But even with that, I find I’ve been petering out around 10 — and waning throughout that whole time. My day job involves writing/editing/reading, and much of that (99.99%) is done online, staring at a screen. By day’s end, I’m simply shot. Writing is hard enough without adding fatigue into the mix.

Enter the mid-day quickie.

What I’ve been doing of late (2-3 times a week) is sneaking in a quick writing session around 1 pm or so, for an hour. Just dive into the script and focus on ONE BEAT. It maybe be a half page action sequence, or more likely, dialogue that I want to punch up (read: slash and burn and puke and “Did I really write that?!” and delete and start over).

I can’t remember who said it (do you?), but the idea is, we each have times of the day when we’re firing better on all cylinders — why give that “good” time to the day job if you can give it writing? My job allows me to disappear if need be for ‘library research’ or ‘a meeting’ and by gawd I’m taking that time. It not only helps me get small beats done, but even more importantly, it whets my appetite for the writing session to come later that evening.

It’s foreplay. Getting me all hot ‘n heavy for the wordmaking to come later on. I’m a wordtease. I leave something undone, a sentence, say. Or start the next beat, knowing what you want, then just leave it. You’ll get to it later, and you’ll be hungry to do so.

Afternoon delight. Get some.


write hard & finish

Methods Madness 2

Again, facing another maddening stretch at work, so again I escape by thinking about projects and thinking about how I get from A to Zed. Off the heels of the post about my “start from page one each day” method, I spent some time thinking a bit more about the process things that work for me, as well as those that don’t (and end in self-loathing and Cookie Monstering my way through a box of Thin Mints).












Above: One serving.

Anyway. As I mentioned in the first part of this process chat, one of the most productive changes I’ve made over the last couple of years is to lower the importance of page count. I’m still aware of page count, obviously, but mainly (or even, only) for me as a marker of structure: I know I want to hit Act II by a certain page, midpoint by a certain page, etc. But I never count “pages written” as a goal or victory. As I alluded to in the other post, I think that’s because I tend to go back over (and over and over and over) a section repeatedly before moving on.

Another thing I’ve been ‘devaluing’ as a victory is time spent in the chair. Now, don’t get me wrong, I PREACH “Ass + Chair = Pages”. I believe that. But for me, I’ve been more efficient/productive when I focus on finishing beats or scenes. Sometimes, my goal for the night’s writing is simply to nail the button on a particular scene, or to rework a beat and nail the relational domino (and I’ll chat about the idea of relational dominoes at some point).

So again, I ask: what’s working for you? What processes have you tried and discarded? How has your writing process evolved?

Write hard and finish, yo.

Methods Madness

My writing methods have changed. I’m not really sure why or when, but I’ve gone from being a firm believer of the “chaos” draft (or, what some refer to as the ‘vomit’ draft, the ‘just get the fucking thing on the page’ draft) to…whatever this thing I do now would be called. Visually, my process is best represented by the final scene of I AM LEGEND, where the mutant bangs his head against the 2 inch thick glass repeatedly till it (glass and/or head) cracks.










Above: Look, Dan’s writing again.

I come from a background in playwriting, where I mainly wrote plays nobody wanted to stage. Nobody. When asked what genre of plays I write, I reply without hesitation, “Unwanted.” But one thing that is great about writing a play is, since it is largely about ideas, hopefully big ideas, the chaos draft is wonderful. You start with a very loose idea of structure but with some ideas about the ‘thing’ you want to write about. The chaos draft works well for plays, because to explore an idea, it helps to sort, well, explore it freely. To NOT have a predetermined path of how you’ll do it; just knowing the neighborhood in which you want to tromp around is enough to get started. You tappity-tap some characters, then THEY start telling you what THEY think about your idea, and little by little, like chipping away the marble, your theme is articulated and you then you can develop the structure that helps you say what you must say about it.

For me, there are limitations to using this approach with screenwriting. I feel like I just don’t have the leisure time within a screenplay to do this tromping around. The narrative thrust required in a screenplay is simply more demanding (at least to me it is, and I’m not sure why). I can’t skip past shit beats that I know are shit because I just can’t leave that mess behind me.  Somehow I’ve lost the ability to do the “oh I’ll fix that beat later thing.” And the thing is, I teach the chaos draft when I teach screenwriting. Because for everyone, especially young writers, The Most Important Thing is finishing (it’s even part of my favorite writing saying, at the bottom of this entry). In short: An unfinished work is an obscenity.

I don’t think my approach is healthy, to be honest. Because writing is so damn hard (not physical labor hard and not working 3 jobs to pay rent hard, but still pretty damn hard), you need victories to pull you along. Script deals? Options? Meetings with potential producers or reps, sure, those are all great victories that we each dream of. But more importantly, we also need to proudly lay claim to DAILY writing victories (at least I do): “Finish Act I,” “hit the midpoint,” “finally nail the monologue,” “find the missing, unifying metaphor or image.” Page count, moving forward, bit by bit, is absolutely a victory, and one not to be taken lightly. So why do I dismiss it so easily?

I think what’s happened to me is somewhere I’ve either redefined ‘victory’ for myself, or maybe it’s more like, I’ve created a hierarchy of writing victories, and page count just isn’t as high for me. Maybe because now I’m at the point where I know I’m going to finish it, because I’ve done it successfully a few times now. Here’s what I do now, and it’s sort of simple:

1) I treat the first half of the screenplay as its own movie, and I start on page one each day. Page one, each day. My goal is to make that first half a fantastic movie that culminates in an emotionally gripping, visually arresting way (what will be the full movie’s midpoint).

2) Once I hit the midpoint, I write the second half of the screenplay, and the midpoint becomes my new page one, and I make THAT half an awesome movie that’s even better than the first half.

This isn’t to say the two ‘movies’ aren’t connected; obviously they’re the front and back of the same damn movie, and I’ll do a full polish. And when I do that polish, I do jump from one to the other, but at first, by and large I try to really focus one half at a time. By focusing my attention like this, I make sure the create a sense of rising action that sets a distinct emotional tent pole in the midpoint (and then crisis) for the audience to hang on to. Then I do it again for climax. (I’ll write about structure another time, if anyone wants to chat about it).

I’ve done this on the last 3 scripts, and it works really well (for me). I had been doing it for a script when I went to Austin Film Festival, and heard Eric Roth (who I want to be) say he does this—he starts on page one every day. That was a huge thing for me to hear at that time. It was like he gave me permission to ignore the vomit draft theory and do what works for me. The result, for me, is a ‘first’ draft that is, literally, more like a 4th draft if I had I gone the chaos draft route, then revise, and revise, and….

What do you do? What’s your approach to completing the “first” draft? Your daily writing routine? Are you a chaos drafter, or do you (like me*) keep going over beats until you’re satisfied, and then (and only then) move on?

Write hard and finish.


*Isn’t THIS what all blogs are really about? What all dialogue is really about? What all writing is really about: “Like me. Please.”

Butcher Holler Optioned by Under the Stairs Entertainment

My horror script, Butcher Holler, has been optioned by Under the Stairs Entertainment. I’m excited about working with this young company. Sandra Leviton (President/Producer) and Miranda Sajdak (VP/Producer) are the ladies behind Under the Stairs (or, as I call them, The Butcher Holler Girls). When they pitched themselves to me, I could sense their passion and just pure joy when talking about my script. They really ‘get’ it; they get the style, the tone and the classic horror movie references.

They laughed at the gross stuff.

They giggled at the really gruesome stuff.

The horrific elements of my script that may have turned off others were enthusiastically—GLEEFULLY—embraced by this energetic duo. They’re smart and not only know the biz, but they know script development. Most importantly, after talking to them, I just had this feeling:

I am going to make a movie with them.

The P.A.N.D.A. War wins AFF!

FIRST PLACE WINNER, Comedy Feature, Austin Screenplay Competition, 2012

Feature Spec, Young Teen Coming of Age Rom-Com

To finally match his awesome family’s super awesome accomplishments, a perfectly average kid must battle the girl he likes in order to win the school’s perfect attendance award.

Butcher Holler

WINNER, Best Horror Screenplay, Table Read My Script Competition

When her corporate coal security job drags Iraq vet Eliza back to the mountains she once fled, she must battle a snake cult of horribly disfigured deep mountain folk to save a mysterious child of the mountain.